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Comments for 'Fort Knox: I'



xNotoriousX
1:57 am | June 15, 2004
Thanx NK, no that anonymous dude is not the author, because i am the author and i posted the story to get your opinion not my own. I would just like to know wtf is the PSEUDOCODE? sorry about being such a noob, but hey, we were all noobs one day. thanx in advance
The Silver Spartan
12:27 pm | June 13, 2004
I am getting the feeling that thesameanonymous is the author, judging by the fact that they said: "This story is very detailed, the setting is detailed, the characters are detailed everything is detailed. I can't wait to see part two."

Um... WTF is with all of you NOOBS!!!??? Other than that NIK is right u do have some potential just use the ******* CODE!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Silver Spartan-
Nick Kang
12:41 pm | June 12, 2004
Okay, does anybody have any idea what that guy just said?

NK
thesameanonymous
11:58 am | June 12, 2004
Haven't i heard all these goddamn comments already! Comment about the story not the commentors. GOing on, it would seem that the marines at FOrt Knox only condescend the marines at Camp Omega and if you read the discription of the marines it says Their the best of the best but their only human. This story is very detailed, the setting is detailed, the characters are detailed everything is detailed.
I can't wait to see part two.
Nick Kang
12:27 pm | June 11, 2004
You've got potential, and that's big coming from me. Although I don't think tropical stuff would grow on a mountain, unless it's a very short mountain. If you add a bit more detail in there, you stories will be shinier than a polished mirror facing the sun.

NK
Mister Chief 117
3:11 am | June 11, 2004
You probably should quit writing. Thank you.
The NEW Zak
1:01 am | June 10, 2004
im not going to write any more stories for awhile, i'll just stick to reading them, i know some of you are cheering, but i would like to take the time to thank anybody that bothered to read my series, except Hawk7886. So thanks, ill be back someday.............
The Silver Spartan
10:05 pm | June 9, 2004
Use the fucking PSEUDOCODE!!!!

On to flame more noobs...

PS: I will be posting more storys soon!!!

-The Silver Spartan-


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