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Comments for 'Brutus, the Spartans, two AIs and the Pirate Fleet (Part 3)' |
HunterKiller
1:53 am | June 22, 2003
Great! 9/10
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Mike Vennart
1:48 pm | June 1, 2003
When are we going to see a new chaptor of the awsome story.
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Tank
6:36 am | May 3, 2003
I gey really exciited each time I see a new chapter of this series TM, cause this series has got a storyline which screams plot twists and fresh, interesting reading. And of course there's your writing style that delivers it real shweet, like. Wicked chapter! The only problem was how long it took you to post it! Don't leave me waiting! Have no. 4 in the next post!
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Steele
2:40 pm | May 2, 2003
Bugger the bloody grammar for the most part. Excellent. 9/10. Keep up the bleeding work.
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Agent Shade
1:30 am | May 2, 2003
hey TM, been awhile since we've seen you here. an excellent story, you did a great job, please keep them coming, 13/10
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scope
10:46 pm | May 1, 2003
10/10 IIIIIIIIIIIIII love it.
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gruntkiller
9:59 pm | May 1, 2003
as always excellent, man a lot of time must of passed for it to of gone from new born (cloned) to adult (im guessing) you probobly could of put a chapter or two between this and your last one.
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James Kinsella
9:47 pm | May 1, 2003
I liked it, but some of the grammar was off. Keep it up!
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Arthur Wellesly
9:47 pm | May 1, 2003
Well done, old man, a smashing good story! Your choice of words was right on the money, to be sure, and your writing style was as good as ever. Keep up the writing, old bean. 10/10, this one was particularly excellent.
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