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Comments for 'CR.03: Chaotic Reign .03' |
TheRedFaction
11:06 am | April 2, 2003
By the way, I am working on another series right now: 'OSIRIS XIII', which is about thirteen elite Marines working for the Osiris organization. In the year 2557, the Covenant return for one more shot at victory with the help of an army of genetic super-soldiers, AHGSW, or Anti-Human Genetic Super Warriors (really cheesy) but will go under the codename 'Massumune'. The Covenant also possess a disrupting system called Angoron, which is broadcasted to block satellites and radar from finding the location of vital weapons and locations.
It'll have cliffhanger endings to keep any readers wanting more.
TheRedFaction
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TheRedFaction
12:11 am | April 1, 2003
Well, that's how I see it. The more descriptive emotion, the better it is to understand who the character is and why he/she made a decision a certain way or for a certain reason.
TheRedFaction
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TheRedFaction
11:53 am | March 31, 2003
Well, TM, if you insist.
By the way, Ishkabibbl, I know a whole lot of people don't like emotional stories, but I guess that's the way I write. CR.03 has so little emotion that it shocked me (at least compared to the first two).
CR.04 is, I suppose, on its way. TM, you almost sounded like my English teacher there for a second. LMAO...anyway, that was enough support to keep going. I was starting to regret my decision anyway. Thanks TM, Ish...
TheRedFaction has turned on his original choice.
TheRedFaction
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James Kinsella
2:15 am | March 31, 2003
I don't think its bad to write emotionally I just don't do it. Telling the emotions of a character can give you some insight as to why the are making a choice or following a specific choice of action. Emotions can be written excellently or horribly and that can be the difference between a good or bad story. Your fanfic can be classified as the former on both counts.
Keep it up!
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Traumatised Marine
5:18 pm | March 30, 2003
Oh, HELL!!!! NO!!!!!!
You can NOT do that. Yes, it is horrible when you don't get any comments, but you've just got to find the track that people enjoy, and deliver it.
Your writing is SO professional. I swear this before God, when I read this, the writing was so fluent that it throttled me into an instant realisation of how good an author you are.
I know it sounds like I'm giving you look-down-my-nose compassion, but I really mean it.
If you want to discontinue this series to find one that will be more successful, DO THAT!
But DO. NOT. QUIT.
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Ishkabibbl
4:59 pm | March 30, 2003
It wasn't that bad I'm just not really into emotional stories.
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TheRedFaction
2:42 pm | March 30, 2003
For those of you who don't care, (and there are a LOT of you) this is probably going to be the final story in the series (yes, I think I'll be discontinuing it) because nobody reads them.
I appreciate the comments I did receive, however, but I doubt anymore stories will appear from me.
(That is, I don't know, but chances are it's true).
TheRedFaction
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TheRedFaction
9:36 pm | March 29, 2003
I'm hoping it is the best yet, since there is more answers, more action, and a little less emotion and tragedy. Of course, it isn't my place to say everyone should enjoy it.
Anyway, looking forward to comments. When at all possible, I'm hoping to get in part .04 in right away...(of course, I haven't even started it yet, so it will be a while, I'm sure).
TheRedFaction
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