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Comments for 'Another day in the life of Master Chief...'



That guy over there who smiles just a bit too wide
3:52 am | October 23, 2003
it was a simile that happened to come forward at the time i was writing this!!!!!! and now i want my chocolate pudding.
FOrunnER
2:49 am | October 15, 2003
I didn't say it wasn't possible, just kinda wierd. Why would they keep prisoners for that long anyhow? And humans aint turtles' event, its possible, just a question of why so long.
Mainevent
10:46 am | October 14, 2003
Since when are humans turtles?

Huh mister?

You answer me that one or no dessert.
That guy over there who smiles just a bit too wide...
4:55 am | October 14, 2003
Hi all, thanks for the comments. FOrunnER, if you read it properly, you will see that the Master Chief says:"I think maybe they are weaker against human weapons". I THINK. that is his exact words(i think.) but anyway we are talking about the covenant here. And, under some circumstances it is possible to have an enzyme in the air that neutralizes the "age" gene in the human body, like the turtle doent have the age gene. But thanks for the comments.
monitor101
9:59 pm | October 13, 2003
Forerunner has taken all the complaints out of my mouth. Besides those it was relitively good. And you have one long ass name. 9/10
FOrunnER
2:33 am | October 13, 2003
FOr a newbie youre not bad, but there were a few flaws. IN one instance, you said 'with one bar of health left', or something like that, that makes it sound like a game. And also, why would the Covenant make Hunter Shields vunerable to human weapons but not COvenant, it would probably be the opposite since they are fighting humans. And the final thing was with the marines not have been aged for 30 years because of the air in there cells, that was just kind of....wierd.

Other than that it was good, overall I give it an 8/10 for good battle descritptions and originality, but minus points for the slip ups. Peace Out!!


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