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Comments for 'Episode Four- Things Get Harder'



Spartan 117
2:20 am | August 29, 2003
when's the SHS coming anywhay?
Spartan117
1:06 am | August 27, 2003
The Marines Provided for it dude
Delta117
4:24 am | August 25, 2003
Dude. Which Spartan 117 wrote this story? Anyway, I liked it, and I'd like to know what else happens. 9/10 just because of the grammor, but hay, I have that proplem too. Maybe the armor just like stormtrooper armor where it covers the body but not enhance. Now why did they get gray suits?
Spartan 117
1:24 am | August 22, 2003
actually, the augmentation surgeries probably took about a week total, then about six months-a year (unlikely) recuperation time.
Spartan117
12:36 am | August 21, 2003
Not even dude. Mine is a differant sort of armor. its not THAT powerful. it doesnt make u run super fast or jump super high. it just protects you from enemy fire. Augumentation takes years, they had three months.
Anonymous
11:27 am | August 19, 2003
I read this one and didn't read 1, 2 or 3. I hope you're not mad... 8.o
Spartan 117
11:15 am | August 19, 2003
9.5/10. you can do better than this, man. but it was still awesome! and its marine corps, not core. pronounced the same, of course. and did they undergo the augmentation surgeries?
Spartan 117
2:22 am | August 19, 2003
if there wasn't any augmentation their bones would shatter inside he MJOLNIR armor.
Spartan117
12:30 am | August 19, 2003
the next episode will be called "The Stanly Hoppetz Story" cause Stanly died from a training program
Spartan117
12:29 am | August 19, 2003
No Augumentation shit, just true blue marines as mussles
Steele
8:15 pm | August 18, 2003
There's no need to copy anything from Red vs Blue. 7.5/10. Work on the grammar and add a touch of realism and originality.


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