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Comments for 'Neverland: The Rescue' |
Anonymous
1:50 am | March 23, 2004
I hate it when a marine dies when you could of saved him but I guess your ass comes first.
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Mainevent
1:47 am | February 18, 2004
I liked it. I've been following this one very closely. I liked it a lot. Those Knights sound like a pain in the ass to fight.
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SOS.Odin
10:25 pm | February 11, 2004
thanks guys
and im tryin on
them verb tenses
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Sterfrye36
4:30 pm | February 11, 2004
Chief Mendez, on Kelly's shoulder, unholstered her pistol and opeded fire on the Knight.
It's not too bad. There's not enough description. And check your verb tenses, too.
Overall, a good effort.
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Walker
2:44 am | February 11, 2004
*Crowd cheers* We want more! We want more! We want more!
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CoLd BlooDed
12:24 pm | February 10, 2004
Lol...cool, and thanks for reading my chapter. :D
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SOS.Odin
12:22 pm | February 10, 2004
if ur good enough
you become a guardian
and everyone knows who
the guardians are :D
if not i guess ur just
...gone
sucks
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FOrunnER
1:45 am | February 10, 2004
Great story. Cant wait to see where this one leads ;)
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CoLd BlooDed
11:44 pm | February 9, 2004
Those Knights seem like some tough ass son of a bitches...
I wonder where you go once you die...again?
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