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Comments for 'Halo Poem/Rap'



yomomma
2:42 pm | January 27, 2004
that sucked
Jink
1:14 am | January 16, 2004
Organization and spelling, capitalization could use work. Rhyming as well.
Sergeant B
3:27 pm | January 15, 2004
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! That was okay...but need's to ryhme! And it didn't flow.
Phat Bob
8:28 pm | January 14, 2004
.....
Hawk7886
8:26 am | January 14, 2004
Blah.
teemus
1:45 am | January 14, 2004
It should rhyme more, over all it was so-so
Alpha Lance
11:03 pm | January 13, 2004
So-so....
Mainevent
10:57 pm | January 13, 2004
AABB is rhyming couplets.
Da Mann
7:25 pm | January 13, 2004
Sounds like something P.O.D. would make. Just make sure it's got a AABB rhyme and 4/4 time. It's got potential.
Mastergrunt
2:59 pm | January 13, 2004
I usaully don't go for this kind of stuff so I'm not going to say much.


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