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Comments for 'The Dimensional's Last Stand:Part 3' |
CoLd BlooDed
12:27 pm | March 4, 2004
You really shouldn't finish a series with only three parts. Instead, you should make the chapters longer and not divide them into parts, but actual chapters. This series went by much too fast, and if we can finish it in three parts I think you need to work on length.
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skseifer
1:47 am | March 4, 2004
Well, that's my style of writing. I'll try and lengthen it next time.
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ToFu
11:15 pm | March 3, 2004
I just now read this series, man wow...ur chapters r too short, u had one with just a paragraph and two sentences...it became dull to me
but oh well.
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skseifer
11:21 pm | March 2, 2004
The ending of the Dimensional series. Sorry it took so long. This damn Internet Explorer 6 is being a d*** and decided to not let me post my story up. I had to get a new browser so all is good. Hope you like it!
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