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Comments for 'Perfect Opposition-part 2'



MASTER XBOX
8:40 am | August 7, 2003
I DINT READ IT BUT IAM SURE IT SUCKS BECUSR THESE PEOLE MAKE THE HUNTER BELIVE!SARGE YOUR TO FUCKING NICE GAYASS
MASTER XBOX
8:40 am | August 7, 2003
IT SINKS ARE YOU 8 HAHAAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHH DUM ASS
MASTER XBOX
8:40 am | August 7, 2003
IT SINKS ARE YOU 8 HAHAAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHH DUM ASS
ThReaDeDacE3
10:35 pm | August 10, 2002
Your story here seems to me like a cheap imitation of Shadows "Rise To Honor". Is that where you got your story line? cause it seems like that to me. im not accusing you of anything, but hey, keep it up. i want to see how your story goes.
~ski200~
9:14 pm | August 8, 2002
sorry,i was low on time
Sarge
8:11 pm | August 8, 2002
Hey if you would like before you post a story send it to me and I'll beta read it for you and tell you if its good and edit it. You'll need some help with this one.Anyone who wants a beta reader I'll read it for you send it to banserkigrunts@hotmail.com-Sarge
Knightmare
6:56 pm | August 8, 2002
Its... Too fast... Sorry to say this but it needs a lot of work,if not a lot then at least a fair bit


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