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Comments for 'On A Pale Horse: The Esteem' |
FOrunnER
11:04 am | July 27, 2003
Pale Horse is actually one of my favorite series in Fan Fiction along with Oblivion and Spartans in NYC. So what if the grammers not perfect, nobodys is
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Silent Hunter
8:40 pm | July 11, 2003
I just woke up from a looooooooooooooooong nap...That Air-conditioner makes it feel like a crypt...anyway, I need a while for my brain to restore to the state it was...so don't expect ch 2 for a while...but I'm planning a Comedy in the future
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Anonymous
6:12 pm | July 11, 2003
Just Kidding
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Anonymous
6:12 pm | July 11, 2003
Just Kidding
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Anonymous
6:11 pm | July 11, 2003
HAHA sucks to be you!
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Silent Hunter
4:06 pm | July 11, 2003
he, OK, I never said I was Nylund or something...In fact, one of my English teachers said, "if I give you a 70, do you promise to never set foot in my English class again?" lol
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Wiley
3:27 pm | July 11, 2003
What jamirus said.
Still, a 9/10
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Jamirus99
3:50 am | July 11, 2003
That's okay, I am too ;)
The story's looking good, but it is CHOPPY as hell. Write in complete sentences, and try for a little better sentence structure too- sometimes it was confusing to read even simple sentences. I'm not tryingto grade you- just telling you how to imrpove the sotry so I can enjoy it more.
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Silent Hunter
3:09 am | July 11, 2003
Note: I made a mistake in the last time/location thing...it should be 2100Hours...Sorry for the mistake, I was suffering from severe sleep deprivation...
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