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Comments for 'On A Pale Horse: New Mombasa'



Shadowrunner
10:35 am | July 5, 2003
Hey kewl! It's always interesting to read other peoples reconstruction and see all of your own mistakes

i got the names all wrong in my edition... ARGH!

Well, good work! Keep it up!
Silent Hunter
10:51 pm | July 4, 2003
Okay, I feel stupid...I thought you ment the people insulting other people...
Agent Shade
9:11 pm | July 4, 2003
oh yeah, me and 'Nosolee are looking for a fight, muahahaha
'Nosolee
8:44 pm | July 4, 2003
Oh yeah, who wants to joke-battle it out with 'Nosolee!
Silent Hunter
11:56 am | July 4, 2003
Crap, I just got the greatest Idea for things to come...I cant get it done fast enough...damn you hands...damn you...

Ahem...what was I talking about?
Oh yeah, Parts 4 and on are gonna be good...
Silent Hunter
11:44 am | July 4, 2003
Thanks, I'm working on Part 4, where you'll learn more about the elite out to destroy the MC.
Agent Shade
10:55 am | July 4, 2003
actually, most comment battles i've seen are a joke...they usually start off with Hunter_Killer threatning a person with a make believe AR or Jackhammer launcher, then other people get pulled into it. and i wasn't insulting your story, just wondering if a joke battle was starting here
Silent Hunter
4:42 am | July 4, 2003
I have just submitted the 4 part...dont look so surprized! I had motivation tonight...
Silent Hunter
2:22 am | July 4, 2003
There is really no reason for those comment page battles. I mean, I could read the worst story ever, and I wouldn't insult the guy. I would make a few suggestions, in the nicest tone possible. I mean, when something you spent a lot of time making get's insulted, that is one of the most degrading things that can happen to you.

BTW, Thanks for the reviews
Agent Shade
1:33 am | July 4, 2003
amazing at the amount of comment page battles going on...anything gonna start here? Agent Shade is gonna bring out the big guns! good storry by the way 10/10
Hawk7886
8:18 pm | July 3, 2003
Nice work! I rate it the same as 'Nosolee.
'Nosolee
1:50 pm | July 3, 2003
Nice rendition of the E3 demo: 9.25/10


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