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Comments for 'Halo 2: Capter 1: Defenders of Earth' |
Shadowrunner
9:48 pm | June 20, 2003
eeerr.... what's this HTML you all seem to know about? (i know it's a programming language for the internet, but in what manner do i need it?)
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Halo Addict
5:58 pm | June 20, 2003
I'm starting to read it...
1. Spellcheck r friend
2. New paragraph for new speaker
3. I dunno. HTML?
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Gold Spartan
2:36 pm | June 20, 2003
very good on the story. mad props, wish I could do better...keep doing it
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Hunter_Killer
11:06 am | June 20, 2003
You can do without HTML, but the other three need work.
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Shadowrunner
10:17 pm | June 19, 2003
Will do, thanks for the feedback :)
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Wiley K.
3:23 pm | June 19, 2003
1: new paragraph when someone new speaks
2: You misspelled "Chapter"
3: HTML
4: lots of errors, use spell check
Other than that a good story, 8.75/10
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Havok
3:21 pm | June 19, 2003
good ideas, good plot, but new paragraphs for each time someone talks, and rethink your descriptive words.
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Shadowrunner
12:41 pm | June 19, 2003
Hey can anyone please post a comment here? it's getting silent...
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