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Comments for 'Gorjn Yujont Seris: Escape from Rudts 2; Part 2'



Scraps
11:04 am | June 17, 2004
Dear disgruntled critics,

So I don't know the code. Don't shit your pants over it. As for the comedy, I'm not a f*~#@ comedian. Confusing names: They're ALIENS, they're sposed to have wierd names.
The plot: have you read my seris, or are you dislexic with a person that has a speach inpediment?!
One more thing. Why did only review my story? I can't find you guys any where else. What happened? Did your hand break up with you and you needed to get some anger out!!!!!!????????
Scraps
11:04 am | June 17, 2004
Dear disgruntled critics,

So I don't know the code. Don't shit your pants over it. As for the comedy, I'm not a f*~#@ comedian. Confusing names: They're ALIENS, they're sposed to have wierd names.
The plot: have you read my seris, or are you dislexic with a person reading to you with a speach inpediment?!
One more thing. Why did only review my story? I can't find you guys any where else. What happened? Did your hand break up with you and you needed to get some anger out!!!!!!????????
kirpan
10:15 pm | June 2, 2004
ya i hate to tell you, but these guys are right.




"My name is Kirpan."
russ687
3:41 am | June 2, 2004
Hard to read and not very interesting.....not the way I like them.
Mister Chief 117
5:33 pm | May 30, 2004
No code-0
No attempt at spacing because you didn't know the code-0
Boring attempt at comedy-0
Confusing names-0
A 'wtf is going on' plot-0


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