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Comments for 'Prodigal Son: Part 11 Kyoko'



Scott D
1:44 am | June 2, 2004
Ah screw it, I'm truncating the chapter, it should all be posted soon and I'll start #12 next week with Scott's own fear of escaping Reach's destruction... with 150 civilians and marines in tow. The question is, is it time for him to die? I can gurantee you at least two characters are dying next chapter.
Scott D
1:06 am | June 2, 2004
Yeah well this chapter has three more parts, I have to code and present the other two, I'll take care of those later this week. Thank you for your encouragement. And A lot of people dont realize if they want, I can just send them a word file of the chapter, because quite frankly, I hate having to interject those damn things into like 10 pages of single spaced text.
SeverianofUrth
1:39 am | May 27, 2004
More people need to read this. However, your lack of coding is turning people off... Which is a shame.
SeverianofUrth
1:35 am | May 27, 2004
I second that. It's definitely better than the novel Halo:Flood. Deep characterization, and enough action to keep the easily bored occupied, while having enough intrigue to fascinate me.

in the words of Frost Bite, KUDOS, my friends, KUDOS.
Frost Bite
8:04 pm | May 26, 2004
That was awsome... You are an excellent writer... it wouldn't suprise me in the least if you were asked to right the next Halo novels.only 11 short chapters and you have already set up main characters, a possible turn coat, several in depth battle scenes and enough indepth coverage of all of this for even the most dull-witted of us to get a clear picture.

KUDOS my dear friend KUDOS.


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