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Comments for 'The Siege of Zion Base; Part One: Mission - Chapter 5' |
Scim to Cado
10:25 pm | February 16, 2004
Thanks, I had everything looking fine, but when I was adding all the "[indent]"s and italic and bold crap I guess I missed a few. I only a few only after I had posted it. =(
See, I do most of my stuff in MS Word and just copy and paste it. I'll be more careful inthe future. =)
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Capo Rip
12:24 pm | February 16, 2004
That was DECENT! Well done.
The obstacle course was very Nylund :)
If you want any advice, do a couple of read thrus before posting the next one, there were some mixed up words, inconsistent numbers and typos, and a few spelling mistakes (I'm pretty sure its "rappel").
But good paragraphs and stuff. I wish it was only this sort of stuff that actually got past Louis.
Hey, I said I'd read it, didn't I?
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MC's Cousin
12:58 pm | February 15, 2004
Well, pretty good. I like the mystery of the Covie spy deal. Although I have something tunging at my mind. I hope you make "Zion Base" something special. Especially since it is on a planet with such a profound name of: "Genesis".
Signing Off
MCC
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Scim to MC's Cousin
1:48 am | February 15, 2004
Hehe, you just wait. =D
Special? Pleh... this makes the word special seem to be useful only with dinner platters.
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