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Comments for 'The Siege of Zion Base; Part One: Mission - Chapter 4' |
Scim to MC's Cousin
1:43 am | February 15, 2004
Well you have to realize that part one is all back story. I have to set up for the main story plots to be established correctly otherwise... what happens? Nothing really. I can't jump right into the action in this particular story. The main fruit of this plot really starts to get good in the second part and throughout the next few chapters.
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MC's Cousin
1:03 am | February 15, 2004
I will apologize for not reading the stories in their proper order. I get a wierd sort of view from reading them backwards. Nice. Like the storyline. I like how you lead up to the next story, but things seem to go by pretty fast. No read "in depth" fighting. that's just fine of it's your style, and I wouldn't just switch to that kind of writing either.
Signing Off
MCC
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