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Comments for 'The Siege of Zion Base; Part One: Mission - Chapters 1 & 2'



MasterCD
6:39 am | March 28, 2004
Yes, I know, the stupid computer pasted my comment twice. Sorry!
MasterCD
6:36 am | March 28, 2004
Good as the last one. Just one problem - 'his head hurt with pain.' Um, what else is it supposed to hurt with? Peanuts?
MasterCD
6:36 am | March 28, 2004
Good as the last one. Just one problem - 'his head hurt with pain.' Um, what else is it supposed to hurt with? Peanuts?
Dispraiser
5:08 am | February 19, 2004
How can one update (this one) be two chapters? You shoudl have madew this one chapter 1, and the next 2 instead of 3... Sorry, but my crappy logic has made me evil in this way. This isn't a problem, really, but I'll make it into a huge one in my head... It's probably some mental defect I have or something.
putamee
6:04 pm | February 15, 2004
too much "..."
MC's Cousin
1:27 am | February 15, 2004
Good good. I think it was..well you know.

Signing Off


MCC
FOrunnER
11:48 pm | February 14, 2004
Love it, love it, love it. It was an awsome story. The only complaints I have with this story I posted in the prolouges comments section. Nice work, this deserves and A.
CoLd BlooDed
11:44 pm | February 14, 2004
Good idea, its usually better--well, in my opinion--to release one or two chapters at a time. That way they are not rushed to read them before the next update.
Scimitarex to CoLd BlooDed
7:57 pm | February 14, 2004
Thanks alot.

The reason I didn't do the whole thing as one is because of size restrictions and I wasn'tsure when I was going to get the chance to post them if HBO went down again. I'll release probably two chapters in one entry from now on to save space.
CoLd BlooDed
5:14 pm | February 14, 2004
At once I thought: "When people post in five chapters at a time they won't be that good."

You proved me wrong, big time, keep up the good work.


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