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Comments for 'Dust and Echoes through an elites eyes. Part 1' |
MC's Cousin
6:14 pm | June 15, 2004
Official? Well now, I like the sound of that...
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Nick Kang
12:07 pm | June 15, 2004
Maybe Guardian was saying that to make you look official, MCC
And the story was really, really, really, really, really short and needed a bit more detail.
NK
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MC's Cousin
12:16 am | June 15, 2004
Stories? Well, perhaps someone is writing under my name. But unfortunately, I have yet to write, but I do appreciate your comment. Though I'm not sure how you came up with that notion.
Hmm...
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Guardian
8:22 pm | June 14, 2004
tooooooooooooo shooooooooort, and no use of the code. MC's Cousin is a good writer and many of his stories are good. Use the code you'll do a whole lot better
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MC's Cousin
3:39 pm | June 14, 2004
I just don't see why people wouldn't wan't their stories to look better. I mean, it takes five or less minutes to read the instructions, and it always makes a piece better.
People these days...
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Black Knight
11:40 am | June 14, 2004
Me too! Got to use the code!! People are gonna say Im a hipacrit one day,but im warning you to use it so you wont end up like me! I said people r gonna call me a hipacrit one day 'cause i probably wont use the code either!
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Solidus Snake
8:09 pm | June 13, 2004
I totally agree with MC there.
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MC's Cousin
7:53 pm | June 13, 2004
Sorry bub, but I really wasn't inclined to finish that. You need to impliment the code, which can be found in the instructions on the FF page. Convienent isn't it?
Also, you might as well have the Covies speak translated into english for the reader, with the universal understanding that they are indeed speaking Covie speak.
You also need to use paragraphs. It makes it much easier on the eyes. And you need to use a new parargraph for every piece of dialogue [for each speaker].
Overall, you need to make the Covies sound more Covie like. Read Halo: The Flood, it will give you a general idea of how they "normally" sound and act. Enough at least to make your stories better.
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