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Comments for 'Private Johnson'



DUDE
8:31 pm | August 26, 2003
Yeah, are thirteen or something? Grammar is an ass kicker. Why were the grunts alone? They never patrol without some sort of leader nearby.
Jamirus99
1:44 am | August 26, 2003
Damn, that was choppy. The story might have been more enjoyable had it been broken up into manageable bits that were spell and grammar checked.

The story itself was also sort of weird...is this meant to be a series?


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