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Comments for 'Forsaken and Alone'



Dave Luck
5:49 pm | July 12, 2004
Very depressing poem. I don't rate poems, because as I said earlier, laws of Grammar and Spelling can be bent or broken in poetry.

Romac, you've... changed. At first, I saw a n00b. Now I see you have potential as a writer. I don't hold anything against you. Not even when you swore you would never come back, and all hail the n00bs.

However, I do hold extreme prejudice against S.S. He's sexist. S.S, keep your bigotry in check, before Wu discloses your IP address to the local police. They can, and will trace it, and we will shut you down. Permanently. Unless you want to be pushing up daisies in permanent retirement, shut up, or, I will suggest to the judges to force you to confess publicly for your offenses, and then execution. In Canada, the Liberals are still in power, so it means a life sentence, rather than capital punishment. However, if we tell the law to try you under a court in the State of Alabama or Texas, I am sure you will not see the light of another day.

- Dave.
romac1991
11:20 am | July 12, 2004
God...is that faggot everywhere I go? I'm trying not to be made, but he is starting to piss me off. Please stop smamming bitch.

romac1991
Jessica
7:30 am | July 12, 2004
No romac, he spams wherever i go...Btw, Great Poem...veeery veeeery good...^.^

Jess
Red Ghost
9:48 pm | July 11, 2004
Hey man, no one's mad at you...very touching poem too. And don't listen to jerks like ss, he doesn't know anything.
Awacar
9:25 pm | July 11, 2004
spanish spartan
5:33 PM | July 11, 2004
YOU ARE RIGHT, THE POEM SUCKS ROMAC. A STORY ABOUT BLOOD COMING OUT OF AN ASSHOLE ISNT COOL

spanish, I can understand you, if someone wrote a story about me that said bad things about me, I would be angry too.

Unfortunately, there is no other way of writing about you.
Mastergrunt
9:07 pm | July 11, 2004
Sorry about that ;)
Mastergrunt
9:03 pm | July 11, 2004
You have major issues spanish spartan. Oh, and why don't you come up with a name that fits you like sexist spaniard or something to that extent.
Anyways awesome poem romac.
Mastergrunt
9:03 pm | July 11, 2004
You have major issues spanish spartan. Oh, and why don't you come up with a name that fits you like sexist spaniard or something to that extent.
Anyways awesome poem romac.
Nick Kang
6:54 pm | July 11, 2004
God, ss. I not only hope you die soon, I hope you get ripped apart by tour chainsaw-wieldinf mom.

NK
spanish spartan
4:33 pm | July 11, 2004
yOU ALL SUCK. I HATE ROMAC AND THE STORY HE DID WITH JESS. I HATE THIS STORY TOO. SO I HOPE YOU DIE SOON
spanish spartan
4:33 pm | July 11, 2004
YOU ARE RIGHT, THE POEM SUCKS ROMAC. A STORY ABOUT BLOOD COMING OUT OF AN ASSHOLE ISNT COOL
Severian
11:36 am | July 11, 2004
Your poem could have been alot better... it seems to suffer from the same sappy-teenage-angst popularized by bands like Staind and Linkin Park... that is, depression made popular and stale.
I'm not doing this cause I hate you, romac. I'm not mad at you either.
Awacar
8:02 am | July 11, 2004
A good poem, the mood it brings forth... amasing.

I kept hoping most of the time that the pistol would go "click" instead of "bang"... am I a bad person?
Nick Kang
1:01 am | July 11, 2004
All is forgiven, romac. Time heals all wounds. I'm not mad at you anymore, I'm not sure if anyone is. The poem is somewhat touching.

NK
CoLd BlooDed
7:10 pm | July 10, 2004
Wow, not bad, definately better than some of the other poems out there.

Oh, and romac, I'm not mad at you anymore. :P

Good poem, I felt your sadness, kinda.


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