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Comments for 'Defending America Chapter 1' |
black titan
10:08 pm | June 18, 2004
that story was cool. You are a good writer. Nick Kang will die a slow death.
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Nick Kang
7:15 am | April 24, 2004
Your story sucks butt romac! Stop writing! I am the best writer of all. Everyone else sucks. Like Coldblooded, hunterkiller, ODST, and everyother bastared here. Nick Kang remember the name!
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Gallagher
2:58 pm | April 13, 2004
NIce one, yo! but work on diff cities and have the Chief come in a few chaps
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Nick Kang
1:30 pm | April 12, 2004
Thats cool, but don't spam the FF section with both of em at once.
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romac1991
6:32 am | April 12, 2004
i finished the second in the series and im workin on the third!
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romac1991
6:32 am | April 12, 2004
i finished the second in the series and im workin on the third!
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dubya
1:10 am | April 12, 2004
9.5/10
very good job
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BlackGhost
10:42 pm | April 11, 2004
Blue Jaguar- a division is about 8,000-10,000 men, not 20,000.
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Connie
10:17 pm | April 11, 2004
Am I the only Australian person who visits this website? No, seriously, if you're an Aussie please reply. Oh yeah, 9.5/10 from me
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Chief17
7:26 pm | April 11, 2004
It was good but the numbers were unrealistic,i agree with Wiley up there.
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Pooman
12:25 pm | April 11, 2004
What can I say about this story that has not already been said? Nothing. 9.5/10
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Nick Kang
12:11 pm | April 11, 2004
I don't, I think once they get a certain amount of stories...
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romac1991
11:53 am | April 11, 2004
Thanks guys for the comments, but do you think I should continue the series?
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romac1991
10:24 am | April 11, 2004
I just submitted the second chapter in Defending America. It s pretty cool I thought. You guys should check it out. Hey does anyone know how often they update the fan fiction? Last time it took a week!
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romac1991aka the author of Defending America
10:23 am | April 11, 2004
thanks Nick!
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Nick Kang
10:17 am | April 11, 2004
Yeah this story's got potential. In the second one, try to throw in more funny traps, like having Covies charge over a pile of grenades just as the Marines fire a rocket or somethin.
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romac1991
4:19 am | April 11, 2004
thanks void, i already started the second one!
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romac1991
4:19 am | April 11, 2004
thanks void, i already started the second one!
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Void
3:36 am | April 11, 2004
hell ya!! you got promise. people said i had promise when i wrote my fist fanfic, the ghosts of tau seti prime, and i say the same about you keep writing. don't be discouraged, i was, and hardly write any more.
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The Collector
1:37 am | April 11, 2004
Hmmm... We'll see
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Helljumper
10:33 pm | April 10, 2004
did ya'll even play Halo, all the Marines in the game functioned in FIre Teams
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LordofDestruction
6:32 pm | April 10, 2004
Nice, but starships don't use fuel. They use a fusion reactor fusing dueterium and tritium @ 90 million degrees. Oh well, 8/10
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Nick Kang
5:45 pm | April 10, 2004
In military ops they still do. Like they have Spec. Ops. fireteams that infiltrate places.
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Blue Jaguar
5:36 pm | April 10, 2004
i dont think they use fire teams anymore, i think that was just during vietnam
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Nick Kang
4:15 pm | April 10, 2004
You're forgetting fireteam.
Fireteam about 3-7 men.
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Mainevent
4:14 pm | April 10, 2004
Two or three things to criticize first.
1)The marines had did a good -Watch the tense changes. Ex: The had done a good job. (or) The marines did a good job.
2) The last elite lost "both of his all of his limbs". Spellcheck to catch that.
3) The title is Defending America, but you said Los Angeles was the last major city left. New York, New Orleans, Miami, Seattle, Boston, etc. If they're all gone, I think it's a little late to defend America.
But other than that I loved it. Pretty humorous. Though it was also kinda short. Keep it up.
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Blue Jaguar
3:00 pm | April 10, 2004
good, but i'm not sure if i didnt read it right or what, but 10,000 marines is almost half a division, not a battalion.
Squad about 10 men
Platoon about 40 men
Company about 80 men
Battalion about 240 men
Regiment about 1000 men
Brigade about 4000 men
Division about 20,000 men
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someone that you dont know
1:51 pm | April 10, 2004
nice, nice. Nice usage of the 1337 namelizer LOL. Loved the part where the elites burned in the huge fire thing. I love pyro stuff so 11/10 on that part. But 7/10 for grammatical errors. great first fanfic you should complete the rest of it. Just use a word processor with spell check next time. 8/10 overall.
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Wiley
12:48 pm | April 10, 2004
woops, forgot to post the score. A 9.4/10
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Wiley
12:48 pm | April 10, 2004
wow, not bad. The only problem I could see was that the numbers were unrealistic. Take a 0 off of every number and you'll be ok
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Nick Kang
10:41 am | April 10, 2004
I want more! I want more!
Ya know, that's good ol' American smarts up there. Blowing away 20,000 Covies without taking a single casualty. I also liked your humorous impact on the traps. You would make for a good comedy author.
9.7/10
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