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Comments for 'The Chronicles of Joe Miller and Derek Smith -Chapter 1' |
Dave Luck
6:32 pm | July 19, 2004
I wonder why someone 'randomly mashed buttons.' I wonder what could've happened if he hit the 'self-destruct-o-matic' switch.
Not bad, not bad. The code's right.
I've been thinking about all these cliffhanger endings... Yup. The only problem with them is that you will be up all night, wondering what happens next!
I know I'm up all night, drawing possible conclusions. And hearing Metallica at 3 A.M has a weirdifying effect on the neighbours... (Or is it neighbors?)
- Dave.
- Dave.
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Pho
6:50 am | July 19, 2004
hey not bad. not bad at all, actually. pretty good story with a decent mix of action and humor in it. keep it up. and the spaces don't bother me. just even clearer to read. but that's just me.
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MC's Cousin
12:21 am | July 19, 2004
I should stop flapping my lips but...Covie_Lover, not -Killer.
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MCC
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MC's Cousin
12:21 am | July 19, 2004
Well, I can be an ok guy as long as you don't throw your poo at me. Like Covie_Killer...hmm...he's a character.
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MCC
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Rampaging jackal thing
6:45 pm | July 18, 2004
oK ill remember not so many spaces for next time. thanks for reading it, I was hoping someone would think it was ok.
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MC's Cousin
5:33 pm | July 18, 2004
It was ok. I don't think that all the spaces between paragraphs is really necissary. But, the code is there.
Oh no, a cliffhangar ending...
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MCC
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