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Comments for 'The Alliance: Part One' |
pooman
11:02 am | August 19, 2003
no problem kkonor thanks fer the comment
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coviekilla
10:57 pm | August 18, 2003
hey its konor man thnx 4 puttin me in ur story this shit ryt here is pimpin i cant wait for part 2
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pooman
10:51 pm | August 18, 2003
thanks everybody
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Hunter_Killer
8:38 pm | August 18, 2003
I like it, except a few mistakes.
dswethrewth9486976984524g8ub yvgheqdc7rchy9tg3q5gt8u7hg784g745bu4jthghjr5tg7u547yt7g74th5t7g547t5476thget97e5tg/10!!!
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el_halo_diablo
7:59 pm | August 18, 2003
good story, but exciting or captivating beginnings is the key to get a person to read a fan fic
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pooman
7:03 pm | August 18, 2003
sweet! thanks!!!
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monitor101
6:07 pm | August 18, 2003
Fucking awesome pooman! 10/10
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pooman
11:17 am | August 18, 2003
it is? holy shit i mean like a 50 caliber only more advanced and deadiler.. thanks
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a random marine
10:21 pm | August 17, 2003
you know that 200 caliber is a 2 inch gun, and helicopters cant go on the moon, but other than that the story was pretty good, im lookin forward to when you type them up on word keep up the good work 8/10
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pooman
1:44 pm | August 17, 2003
means a lot to me... a whole lottz
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pooman
11:47 am | August 17, 2003
thanks guyz!
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pooman
11:44 am | August 17, 2003
shit did i spell it wrong?? oops, thanks hawk
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Hawk7886
11:15 am | August 17, 2003
Good story, although kinda confusing.
8.5/10
Is there a difference between Forerunner and Forunner?
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crashedwarthog
6:50 am | August 17, 2003
u guyz are all suckholes. i'm gonna give this story what it deserves........................................................................................................................................... 11.5/10 hehehe j/k guyz. a great story pooman i like the story line. keep it up!!
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Peregrine
1:08 am | August 17, 2003
Yeah, suggestion. Proof read before posting.
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pooman
12:38 am | August 17, 2003
thanks!!! it means a lot
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Kaboose
12:34 am | August 17, 2003
Actually...i'd say that this is your highest score 11/10!
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pooman
12:52 pm | August 16, 2003
thanks!!!!! im suprised anyone liked this story!!!! it means alot to me thanks guys *cries* really it does
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Tango709
11:58 am | August 16, 2003
and im not just trying to give you a bigger score than khyber and alpha.
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Tango709
11:58 am | August 16, 2003
i can beat them both... 10.5/10!
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pooman
11:02 am | August 16, 2003
any more comments?
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pooman
10:28 pm | August 15, 2003
holy crapp thanks Alpha Lance!! *cries*
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Alpha Lance
9:05 pm | August 15, 2003
No pooman this is your highest score,10/10!
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pooman
9:03 pm | August 15, 2003
thanks! thats my higest score. I dont like makin up names its to hard
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Khyber
8:11 pm | August 15, 2003
dang thats far in the future. you should make futuristic names for the guys. 9.5/10
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pooman
3:00 pm | August 15, 2003
comeon did anyone like this story?!?!?
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pooman
11:35 am | August 15, 2003
keep in mind that i wrote this chapter on something called a notepad soooo it probally isn't that good, but when i get word back IlL Do BettER
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