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Comments for 'From The Front Lines' |
Anonymous
10:19 pm | October 14, 2003
sorry...Ive submitted a new series Branded For Life hasint been posted yet though..
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Jackal Jak
9:43 pm | October 14, 2003
Beautiful, just beautiful. I have to agree with Hikaru but overall it was great. I look foreward to reading more fan fiction written by you.
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Hikaru-119
3:23 pm | October 14, 2003
Very similar to my "A Letter Home" thing. You should read it. You might like it. Overall nicely written, but you had a few time errors that I spotted.
1. The Jerico Campaign was lost in 2535, not 2548.
2. Not one Elite was not found until August 30, 2552 when Reach was hit.
Other than that you made a nice letter story.
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PaYnE
1:48 pm | October 13, 2003
Thank you thank you Im happy!
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Frensa Geran
3:30 am | October 13, 2003
Wow. Just wow. That was wonderful. Excellent use of foreshadowing and mood. I see this is your first submission, and I can tell you right now this is how you get noticed.
Keep it up. 10/10
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