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Comments for 'The Fight for Bravo Base; pt. 5- Enemy Reinforcements' |
ONI_operative_343
1:39 am | October 4, 2003
yeah MasterGrunt, Yavin II is from starwars, as sergeant b pointed out in my second story. i got yelled at for that... but...
i wasnt sure if the starwars' yavin was #2 or 4, so i went w/ 2.
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MasterGrunt
12:50 am | October 4, 2003
Good stroy oni. Just out of curiosity did you get the name Yavin II from star wars. I'm pretty sure I heard it somewhere in there.
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FOrunnER
12:54 am | October 2, 2003
Hey operative, do me a favor and check out my story. In my comments section I left an interesting revelation for the direction my series is going in.
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Alpha Lance
7:55 pm | October 1, 2003
Wow, you still got to get some feedback from me, a fan. But I can wait if the next is going to be this good, which remind me, do not write faster. You would wan't to take time on your stories; faster you write, the more sloopy it will be, I firgure that out a long time ago. But, my storie are getting better every time I write. Of course, I take my time on my stories. But I want to see more from you.
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ONI_operative_343
9:20 am | October 1, 2003
i cant give away the ending! whatever happens to those FIVE marines will happen soon; im going for seven stories. maybe they die, escape... who knows. anyway, thanks for the feedback!
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FOrunnER
2:15 am | October 1, 2003
Once again, great story. Just a piece of advice though. Don't have those four marines kill all those Covenant, it would be very unrealistic unless they had some sort of backup. Otherwise, I would suggest you have them escape. Just my advice, keep it up.
9.5/10
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Anonymous
12:00 am | October 1, 2003
hey man, keep on going, i like these. write faster!!!!
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