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Comments for 'Civilian Assault, pt. One- The Beginning' |
Nick Kang
12:54 pm | February 19, 2004
Well, theres obviously gonna be quite a bit of stragglers if they organize an assault...
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Horror
1:07 am | February 19, 2004
or not many with a lotta bombs lol.
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Horror
12:26 pm | February 18, 2004
ah you saw that gameplay footage also then? It just made me want halo 2 more than ever lol! Good story though waiting for the next.
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FOrunnER to Hikaru-119
12:04 pm | February 18, 2004
Looking foward to it.
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ONI_operative_343
11:44 am | February 18, 2004
wow, thankx alot guys.
(to FOrunnER and Nick Kang)
yea, there's a few straglers... not gonna say how many more, though....
thankx again everyone. this is why i write these.
ONI
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CoLd BlooDed
4:56 am | February 18, 2004
Nice work, ONI. I just managed to get on the internet as I am currently staying at a relatives on Vancouver Island.
AND ITS A GODDAMN MAC! Rgghhhhh....
Good job though, and I hope you continue reading my series.
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IAmDelta
4:03 am | February 18, 2004
Good work. Keep it up.
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FOrunnER to Nick Kang
2:59 am | February 18, 2004
Well Im sure there was an evacuation called for once the Covenant came in, but there are always a few stragglers. Right ONIop?
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Nick Kang
2:26 am | February 18, 2004
Great Story, but I doubt they would let that person stay in his house while a battle is raging.
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MC's Cousin
2:55 pm | February 17, 2004
Good good, it was good. Another perspective from the E3 vid. Nice.
Signing Off
MCC
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Hikaru-119
12:08 pm | February 17, 2004
Nice job. Awaiting next section. Speaking of which if anyone cares my new piece will be out next week.
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ONI_operative_343
12:08 pm | February 17, 2004
to FOrunnER: shhhhhh ;)
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FOrunnER
10:36 pm | February 16, 2004
Good story. Liked the action words, from my interpretation of the title I think that some civilians are going to plan an assualt on the Covenant, but I could be wrong. Great work.
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Rambo_Slaughter Machine
10:21 pm | February 16, 2004
No, the first step in reaching self-enlightenment is realizing ur ignorant. *COUGH*
I am such a pimp.
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Traumatised Marine
8:51 pm | February 16, 2004
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Traumatised Marine
8:50 pm | February 16, 2004
That's why monologue is so important.
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Traumatised Marine
8:48 pm | February 16, 2004
...yep, nothing like a good bit of monologue eh?
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Traumatised Marine
8:48 pm | February 16, 2004
I think talking to yourself is one of the purest ways to reach self-enlightenment.
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Traumatised Marine
8:48 pm | February 16, 2004
Nice bit of monologue too!
Love a good bit of monologue, do I!
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Havok
6:04 pm | February 16, 2004
hey not to shabby, not too shabby at all. good description and action words. the only suggestion i can think of is to space out the story with more paragraphs. makes the story flow a little better
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