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Comments for 'Force 81 Part V: A Devil's Torment' |
NobleWard
5:33 pm | January 20, 2003
Thanks for the encouragement. Dispraiser: The Prologue was my other favorite, but this particular chapter is my fave so far becauase it's not just an intorductory chapter that has just a little bearing on the overall story, but it provides some background, drama, and depth to the main character's history along with being a big battle scene. That's why it rates a notch above the prologue in my book. Thanks again though.
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Wado
12:36 pm | January 20, 2003
In my futile attempt to catch up on all the fan fiction stories I missed... well anyway, I read this one and I liked it.
Nice descriptions and intensity. I like your writing style too. Keep the stories coming.
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Dispraiser
7:02 pm | January 19, 2003
The first was my favorite, but with this one I am glad to see that someone on HBO still knows that stories are generally OVER A PAGE LONG!!! Fanfics are fictions, not a sentace. I don't hear them call their stories fansentances as they are, so keep up the fanfics(note II said fics...)!
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