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Comments for 'Another (Part 1)' |
Jink
4:18 pm | November 22, 2003
Excellent...as far as my history here goes, that was probably the finest story I'd ever read (for the first time)...I was under the name TheRedFaction at the time.
Loving the story here.
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Hawk7886
10:30 pm | November 20, 2003
Very impressive. It took awhile to set up, but it was worth it.
10/10
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Jinkaiden-XI
12:29 pm | November 20, 2003
Aren't you the same Mr. Bill who wrote 'Chance' a long time ago?
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Mr Bill
1:12 am | November 20, 2003
Indeed, that is I Jinkaiden,
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Steele
4:36 pm | November 19, 2003
Nice man, very nice.
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Jillybean
12:53 pm | November 19, 2003
Lovely. Very precise, very military. I just found the format a wee bit hard to read. I find it better (if not grammatically correct) to break up the paragraphs extensively.
Still - off to read the next one now.
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Steve Ollett
12:02 pm | November 19, 2003
I liked that alot. The intro was very good, gave lots of detail and really set the scene.
You obviously know your military stuff describing missle flight patterns, etc.
Good stuff! Keep it up!
Rgds,
Steve
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