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Comments for 'Halo: Captain Keyes Story Part 3' |
monitor101
5:24 pm | April 9, 2003
Thats a bunch of bull I didn't copy the flood maybe one part but barely.
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copyright acts
1:21 am | April 9, 2003
well, that probably doesnt really apply, but seriously, you pretty much tried to copy Halo: The Flood...it was good, but thats because it was from the book....
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Dispraiser
12:23 am | April 8, 2003
Yeah, but then when I need someone to make the badguy kill to make him look worse I often have a hard time... I always have that problem, I put in too few of bad guys. I find workarounds though...
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monitor101
3:32 pm | April 7, 2003
Exactly dispraiser!
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Dispraiser
12:18 am | April 7, 2003
Ah... The good ole' kill em off option... I love doing that to the characters I have no use for...
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monitor101
4:51 pm | April 6, 2003
I know Kinsella but it was to late so i made them die anyway.
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Dispraiser
2:29 pm | April 6, 2003
Here's my advice... Have a pad of paper near you and write down things that you may later need. Make maps so that your people don't stumble in the wrong direction, make character lists so the extra ninth guy doesn't exist and make sure to write down many timelines. It's not so important to have an overall timeline of the plot because you need to let your story decide a lot of it as you write it, but it is very important that you keep track of most chronology and try not to make clerical errors like that.
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el_halo_diablo
1:50 am | April 6, 2003
ok pretty good. Heh on my old series "Cry for a Hero" my character was stuck in one of those cells, but he found a way to get out(no not like out an air duct or anything).
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James Kinsella
1:50 am | April 6, 2003
Pretty good, but you've got your timeline off. Lovell, Hall, Hikowa, and the rest of the command crew where killed in the hills after the traitor Dowski led the Covenant to their position.
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