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Comments for 'Closing with the Enemy Chapter 7 The Convoy' |
monitor101
10:23 pm | December 14, 2003
Thank you for the comments keep them coming. Oh yes I need tips on my next story. I'm having some writers block and can't think of a good plot please if you have any suggestions then please email me at wasup1989@hotmail.com.
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monitor101
10:21 pm | December 14, 2003
Okay for one if they attacked with full force then I don't see the point of writing this fic. Yes I am using references from BHD, WWS, and other military storys. This is about the battle for Echo/Delta base and what went wrong. The plot of this story is what happens and the strategys they used.
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teemus
9:29 pm | December 13, 2003
The action was great, I still think that if the Covenant had those many troops why didnt they just launch an all out assult on the bases? Other then that it was good. I think i recognized a few parts taken from Black Hawk Down...am i right?
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Agent Shade
3:47 pm | December 13, 2003
the violence, the action, the fighting was purely gold, very awesome. i kinda feel that 120 vehicles or something is maybe too much for one firebase to give up to another. i also feel that the Covenant having so many troops at their disposal is odd. what's the point of attacking these bases? is there going to be an actual story behind this battle. is the planet a forerunner planet or something? if it isn't, i'll still reading cuzz i love the action you put into the writing. keep it up.
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