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Comments for 'Closing with the Enemy Chapter 5 Night Approaches'



monitor101
10:29 pm | December 5, 2003
True
Agent Shade
7:50 pm | December 4, 2003
my bad
Walker
1:16 pm | December 4, 2003
A tadbit of information: a report is the sound made by a rifle when fired. Also known as "bang!"
teemus
12:13 pm | December 4, 2003
Once again great story. A few grammer mistakes, but other wise its good.
Agent Shade
8:17 pm | December 3, 2003
one complaint. "loud reports from S2 AM sniper rifles" the sniper rifles are reporting? sorry, just a little confused there lol.

you're writing has indeed improved a lot. hope to see more from you.
Dispraiser
3:29 am | December 3, 2003
Great improvement from many of your other fanfics, though you seem to bob up and down continually. Set your sights at this level at least.


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