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Comments for 'The Mutation (A sequel to the Virus) Prologue'



monitor101
9:07 pm | October 17, 2003
I am going to drop this series and start with a new one.
monitor101
9:05 pm | October 17, 2003
I don't care what nationality you are so calm down. Thanks for the comments.
Javier Fernandez-vina
11:53 am | October 17, 2003
Im sorry if i insulted you with the fucking virus comment.I was just saying what halo meant to me.But you're rigth behind all the figthing there is always politics and they make decisions that can affect the battlefield in way's soldiers can't.It's a good political thriller, and shows what happens behind the scenes of the figths.That was your intention wasn't it.To show the readers what happens in the goverment, well you did good.
Javierfernandez-vina
11:53 am | October 17, 2003
Im sorry if my comment pissed you off.You're rigth behind all the figthing there is politics wich is just as intriguing.In fact politicians can affect the battlefield in way's soldiers can't.I'ts a good story, sorry again.
FOrunnER
12:34 am | October 17, 2003
Dude, relax. Nobody cares that youre Cuban alright, were all united Halo freaks here so lets get along.
The Virus does seem a little like the FLood, but I like it. And you probably should have it in more than two chapters, I mean, if its only gunna be in the first two chapters then why name it the Mutation. 9.3/10, keep it up.
Javier Fernandez-vina
12:02 am | October 17, 2003
And Im not fucking mexican, Im cuban damn it!!
You see that's what i get for being the only stupid idiot to post his real name instead of his screen name.I get fucking racist shit like this, wich i don't care cause im not friking mexican anyways.DAMN!!
Ishkabibbl
10:17 pm | October 16, 2003
It is nice to have more then Wado and Disprasier able to link together stories, and I am interested in what kind of poltics the halo universe has ;-)
monitor101
9:48 pm | October 16, 2003
MasterGrunt the profile of dr. Webber is he's a merciless biologist who will do anything to keep secrecy as well as to keep the project alive and that means testing on humans. You've viewed him wrong. Mexican weird vina kid sure Halo is about a war agaisnt Covenant and Marines but the whole idea is to explore the Halo universe dumbass. And this as well as my last two series were about a 'fucking' virus so don't bitch to me about what Halo is about. Any more comments.
monitor101
9:43 pm | October 16, 2003
The so called Snatchers will only be in the first two chapters. This series is mainly about Holmes and running from ONI and trying to frame them and Uptech. It has more to do with politics than the virus so bear with me. It seems that most people hate things that have to do with the Flood, well I don't care. I hope you will enjoy it more as the plot unfolds and if not them I'll just dump the whole idea. I guess I'm flat out of ideas.
Javier fernandez-vina
6:34 pm | October 16, 2003
I honestly don't like the idea of a disease figthing a war of soldiers.The real heroes are "Honest to god marines", not a fucking virus man.
semper fi.
MasterGrunt
12:03 am | October 16, 2003
This is an okay story except for the new disease. No offense, but this new virus sounds like a combination between the flood, vampires, and resident evil. I honestly doubt that the scientists would actually use this on a human being much less even restart the program.


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