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Comments for 'Halo: The Aftermath pt. 4/5'



CoLd BlooDed
12:06 pm | February 23, 2004
Be sure to check out mine, pooman. :D
pooman
9:04 pm | February 22, 2004
ya, ASOWE, best comedy series evere. In fact in going to go read it right now. (for the like 6 time!) lol
el_halo_diablo
8:05 pm | February 22, 2004
heh, they were all newbies when I was around, but I got tired of writing and had my final Interactive fan fic in queue so I figured I might as well finish things off here for good, so once this fan fic submission thing works, expect the last part of my Interactive fan fic.
CoLd BlooDed
7:23 pm | February 22, 2004
I don't think Alpha is writing stories anymore, H_K and A_S are still here but not posting anything currently.
pooman
4:41 pm | February 22, 2004
ya, good story... what evere happened to Alpha Lance or Hunter_Killer or Agent_Shade?
JCDenton
7:16 pm | February 21, 2004
sup all ive been away for a long time... I got a real update on my progress... my story changed big time, since I was not feeling I would get my story 100% good. anyway, ill might be updating it, and maybe put iton my site, ill let you know.

for those who didnt knew, my story is top of the line and mostly had good comments... i will never stop with this series, fully because I am making a story that spreads in side story's.

you all will here from me again. for now im carefully brainstorming...


hey I posted it here cause its today on the top. so people would read. sorry if I bugged any of you by putting this aay. btw, keep up guy I think with enough passion for halo, youll get the top.
el_halo_diablo
7:25 pm | February 20, 2004
Nice story man, you got potential. Sorry for bothering you folks, but im an old veteran, and I was wondering, do I have to type out the series name along with the title, if it's a continuation of the series?
blind_snowman
4:27 pm | February 20, 2004
Not bad. Not standout material, but a fair attempt!
CoLd BlooDed
12:36 pm | February 20, 2004
No...you're not.
Anonymous
9:13 pm | February 19, 2004
i have history aftermath lol
Anonymous
9:13 pm | February 19, 2004
im ghetto
MC's Cousin
2:53 pm | February 19, 2004
Hmmm...that was interesting. I'm not seeing mush of a storyline in there. And two camo Elites is not much of a trap. Unless the Grunt set it up. That just seemed short and pointless, but I will say that if you added mroe to it, it could and would have been a lot better.

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