Comments for 'Desecrating Providence (Prologue Part 2)'
Capo Rip
12:06 pm | February 17, 2004
I'll comment more after reading the next one. But it's great so far.
Did you mean to call the dead commander of the crashing ship "General"? Because I don't think there's any situation where a general will have command of a ship. Did you mean "admiral"?
Marty
5:12 pm | January 17, 2004
heh... Boru is supposed to say "The Colonel *wouldn't* like his decision" near the end.
