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Comments for 'A Halo Novelization: Chapter 1: The Pillar of Autumn'



Nick Owen in washington
12:00 pm | February 21, 2004
hi whoever you are
2004 feb.
12:00 pm | February 21, 2004
no one is going to come to this site
Zach
6:45 pm | December 14, 2003
Wow its been a year already... WOW!!!
Anonymous
12:09 pm | January 31, 2003
----- Original Message -----
From: zach wild
Sent: Thursday, January 30, 2003 6:14 PM
To: halo@bungie.org
Subject: Halo: The Year Before By: Superz423@aol.com


ALL HELL!: part 1
By: SuperZ423@netscape.net



chapter 1: 9:07 PM 4/7/2455




"Captain, South corridor 2 miles!" A marine said frightenned. Captain Keyes turned and looked behind not only to see four brave Marines running behind the Warthog.The Warthog was running low on fuel. " I should say, Maxamillian. I would think there would be more coveant soldiers." Captain Keyes asked to the driver. Just as Captain finished his sentence, Maxamillian swerved just hitting the leg of a Coveant soldier. The leg of the soldier flew off, the blue blood oozing from the leg of it. Captain Keyes jumped out of the gunner seat and rolled to the ground.
"Shoot, shoot!!!" Screamed a marine.
The guns blared killing 5 coveant soldiers. Captain Keyes smacked a Jackal over the
back of his head(or should I say IT). The Jackal's neck sprayed orange blood everywhere.

About two hours later all people, aliens, warthog, lay in silent dead. Captain Keyes lay
breathless. he sat up, turned around not only to see a banshee flying endless towards him.

Chapter 2 : 4/7/2456




Master Chief awoke, in a cold sweat, and buzzing and beeping. " Having those dreams again?" Cortana asked. "Yea." Master Chief said dreary. "Well have those dreams some other time because were about to hit the planet Zuzena!" Cortana screamed angrily.
Master Chief pulled the throtle towards him, about breaking his hands.(See, folks Master
Chief has reacurring dreams about Captain Keyes death.) Out of nowhere the escape pod hit Zuzena, making a 60 ft. indent in Zuzena's crust.

Four days went by. Master Chief arose out of the escape pod. He pulled out his rope, and latch, and threw it up to the top and climbed out to find a gun to his head.
to be continued
Superz423
12:08 pm | January 31, 2003
sense i cant get my story on this will do
Superz423
12:06 pm | January 31, 2003
----- Original Message -----
From: zach wild
Sent: Thursday, January 30, 2003 6:14 PM
To: halo@bungie.org
Subject: Halo: The Year Before By: Superz423@aol.com


ALL HELL!: part 1
By: SuperZ423@netscape.net



chapter 1: 9:07 PM 4/7/2455




"Captain, South corridor 2 miles!" A marine said frightenned. Captain Keyes turned and

looked behind not only to see four brave Marines running behind the Warthog.

The Warthog was running low on fuel. " I should say, Maxamillian. I would think there

would be more coveant soldiers." Captain Keyes asked to the driver.

Just as Captain finished his sentence, Maxamillian swerved just hitting the leg of a

Coveant soldier. The leg of the soldier flew off, the blue blood oozing from the leg of

it. Captain Keyes jumped out of the gunner seat and rolled to the ground.


"Shoot, shoot!!!" Screamed a marine.


The guns blared killing 5 coveant soldiers. Captain Keyes smacked a Jackal over the

back of his head(or should I say IT). The Jackal's neck sprayed orange blood

everywhere.

About two hours later all people, aliens, warthog, lay in silent dead. Captain Keyes lay

breathless. he sat up, turned around not only to see a banshee flying endless towards

him.

Chapter 2 : 4/7/2456




Master Chief awoke, in a cold sweat, and buzzing and beeping. " Having those dreams

again?" Cortana asked. "Yea." Master Chief said dreary. "Well have those dreams some

other time because were about to hit the planet Zuzena!" Cortana screamed angrily.

Master Chief pulled the throtle towards him, about breaking his hands.(See, folks Master

Chief has reacurring dreams about Captain Keyes death.)

Out of nowhere the escape pod hit Zuzena, making a 60 ft. indent

in Zuzena's crust.

Four days went by. Master Chief arose out of the escape pod. He pulled out his rope

and latch, and threw it up to the top and climbed out to find a gun to his head.
Sarge
9:51 pm | November 11, 2002
Not sure I think it's feb. 2003(Why couldn't they pick a better topic?)
Bruce
8:44 pm | November 11, 2002
You can't change your name. HBO has outlawed it just like they outlawed spamming in the comments section. watch your mouths!
Colonel Miltie
10:00 pm | November 10, 2002
I will be making Chapter 2, but it will definetly not be here soon. Halo is the greatest game, and I really like making stories and stuff on here, but I rarely get to go on my computer. If I'm able to get on, I'm very lucky. I'll try to finish it as fast as I can!
NOTE TO NIKE from Colonel Miltie
4:48 pm | November 10, 2002
I know we are great friends at school,and this website, Nike, but please don't make this page a chat room for us. I don't think anyone else would like that.
Colonel Miltie (MarioMTO)
12:31 pm | November 10, 2002
Hi. It might take a while to make it, but, in one of my stories that I'm making, the Chief finds a book all about ancient history. What I might do is type the "Book of History", and put it on here.If you want to tell me if you think I should or not, just put a comment on this page. Thanks.
Neco Divad
9:29 pm | November 9, 2002
A few minor detals were wong. A sentance was missing out of the conversation on the bridge, Sarge calls the ring "a giant Hula-hoop", and a few other things. Overall, fairly good.
Nike
4:05 pm | November 9, 2002
Yeah Sarge, but Milt's maybe different than the book on a few things. Plus, do you even know when the real Halo novel comes out?
Knightmare(MM
4:45 am | November 9, 2002
Not pointless, if the author makes it better... Then to hell with the book... If you've not said that already.
Sarge
2:12 am | November 9, 2002
Kinda pointless now with the new(worthless) book coming out.
Nike
11:37 pm | November 8, 2002
No it will be Explosive Eagle.
MarioMTO
10:54 pm | November 8, 2002
Sorry to bother ya again, but it's going to be "Colonel Miltie" not Miltie3949.
MarioMTO
10:50 pm | November 8, 2002
Thanks for the comments again, but don't look for the name "MarioMTO" because I'm changing it to Miltie3949. Thanks again!!!
MarioMTO
10:50 pm | November 8, 2002
Thanks for all the great comments!!!
Nike
10:00 pm | November 8, 2002
*my.
Nike
9:58 pm | November 8, 2002
Hmm...not bad Miltie. You see MarioMTO is by friend. Not I'm pissed off at him because he sent in the story and I didn't. I'm pretty surprised though. You did pretty good.
Dyn
5:55 pm | November 8, 2002
I liked it, it goes right along with the game.


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