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Comments for 'Homeworlds XIII'



Mainevent
10:30 am | September 24, 2003
This was my first fan fic story ever.

Right now there is a sort of lull in the action and it will be kinda slow, but the action and intrigue is coming up pretty soon...
FOrunnER
2:56 am | September 24, 2003
I think its very good. Is this your first series? I think it is but you write like your a veteran like Wado or Agent Shade ( well, mabye not as good as them but still good ) 9/10
Please check out my storie to, I think I'm a bit rusty since I havn't posted in a while but comments would be appreciated. Peace Out.
Dispraiser
10:53 pm | September 23, 2003
Nothing to say or complain about really. Um.... Good luck I guess, I mean, his was good.... I don't have anything to complain about though, that makes me sad...
Alpha Lance
10:08 pm | September 23, 2003
Where the hell is everyone, they should be pouring in with a great story like this? But hey, great story, I love this series, keep it up. (10/10)
Mainevent
7:23 pm | September 23, 2003
...review section is now opened for business.


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