halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'Halo 2: Revenge of a Spartan, Chapter 5'



Steele
5:24 pm | April 20, 2003
8/10. Pretty good. But, please always capitalize Marines.
HunterKiller
6:45 pm | April 18, 2003
Yet another chapter complete. Good 8/10
Havok
5:31 pm | April 18, 2003
oh yeah, one more thing. you mentioned about the hunters only being recruited a month ago. everyting in FOR and other literature points to a rigid caste system, the aliens being part of the same race for maybe thousands of years. just my opinion.
Havok
5:24 pm | April 18, 2003
i liked it a lot. great description of the brutes.
Shadow Spartan
4:33 pm | April 18, 2003
dont worry bout the indenting, we are all having problems with it and dispraiser doesnt comment anymore, so you are safe....besides that, this was a pretty good story, i was impressed, keep it up. 8.5/10
LostRock
1:39 pm | April 18, 2003
And yet another chapter complete. Not much to say about this one except...ta-da! indenting!


bungie.org
brr!