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Comments for 'Search for Chief part 1' |
Alpha Lance
5:33 am | August 2, 2003
If you won't covenant time,just say sevent cycle,
nine units,like in the novel,Halo the Flood.
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Legend Player
2:58 pm | August 1, 2003
I Have to admit My writing is off and I forgot to space and grenede may be off Since I have no spell checker. My Parents Bought me the best Game ever. (Halo) Bungie Is like Doom x10 on fire. Any ways Here is preveiw of Search for cheif part two Cheif Mendez Is still alive and just made 76 more trained spartans. But this time Im making a covenant time *00:9^ *meaning minutes and ^meaning hours Cool or Gay??? Or interesting??
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mso395
11:51 am | August 1, 2003
it just blew me away. it was awesome.
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crashedwarthog
5:13 am | August 1, 2003
that last post was mine sorry, i 4got my name
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Anonymous
5:09 am | August 1, 2003
everything was great except for the opening paragraph, it was just a bit hard to follow sorry. anyway everything was kool, and did any of u guys think that covenant military time would be different from human? i mean 900 hours could be something completely different in human time anyway 8.5/10
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Legacy
6:56 pm | July 31, 2003
uh, it's 0900, without the (:)
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scope
4:39 pm | July 31, 2003
7.5/10 A couple spelling mistakes. Work on your indentations also
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Agent Shade
3:03 pm | July 31, 2003
ok, like many others will say, use the [indent] tag whenever someone new speaks...plus, try and seperate your paragraphs so the story flows easily, there was that really long one in the middle of your story and i got so confused as to who was talking or whether it was explanations...a few spelling mistakes, but those are expected, just work on the indent and separating paragraphs and this story will be kool
7/10
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Hidden Assassin
1:33 pm | July 31, 2003
I believe it would be 09:00 hours, instead of 900 hours.
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