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Comments for 'Of Traitors and Betrayal (-=Part-Two=-)' |
DeltaStrike
7:53 am | June 16, 2004
::hums Jeopardy! tune::
so...whens the next part coming out?!
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InSaNe1024
9:45 pm | June 5, 2004
The best series I've ever read. On par with William C. Dietz's (Halo: The Flood) writing. My only suggestion is that you use marks to indicate where a scene ends.
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Like that.
Hoo, boy...200 movies 0.o! Elites must have a really long attention span. I can't wait for the next one! Huri's gonna kick some Covie ass! Woo!
Elites are so cool....
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Speedy
3:16 pm | May 28, 2004
Great series, no complaints aside from the name changing. I suggest a single title, with different chapter names (You can still break them up into parts as you do now with that process.).
Definitely one of my favorite fan fiction series. And as you see from the page numbers, that's a lot to choose from.
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yeti
8:51 am | May 22, 2004
yeah, good, yeah, good, but isolate the different scenes more. i cant tell if its the same scene or a new one
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Helljumper
9:36 pm | May 21, 2004
kill the story now while its still ok
ODST
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Gold Elite
7:57 pm | May 21, 2004
This story is getting good, but I'm a little confused. Was there a time skip back in time?
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someone that you dont know
9:59 pm | May 19, 2004
Nice once again. This is definantly (I know i didnt spell it right) One of the "Beast" (LOL) series ever. But seemed kinda like a mirror-story to me. Elite goes helps the humans, human betrays to help the covenant.... Get it? Oh well. Keep up the good work. 9.5/10
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DeathSquadTrooper
8:20 pm | May 19, 2004
Dude the series so far has been BEAST!, its awesome, i mean it has a great plot to it, i like it in the direction its goings, over all its a 9.5 out of 10, keep them coming man.
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Lance
1:53 pm | May 19, 2004
Titles change with each chapter, look for my name, it should make it easier, these are my only stories so far
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Spacefan
12:09 pm | May 19, 2004
Well, I do hope that Ackerson gets his due.
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guns_n_cars
10:42 am | May 19, 2004
good story, but please, stop changing the title, it getting hard to keep track of.
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