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Comments for 'Shadow Play Part Two' |
PlasmaDragon
3:23 am | May 15, 2004
This is the best series ive read so far. Damn good s**t,Johnson
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Slayer Boi
9:43 am | May 8, 2004
kool good story all we need now ar larel and the grunt(i cant remember his name) to be on the UNSC side
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yeti
1:08 am | May 8, 2004
ok, author, id like to see a bunch of puny organisms to try to keep the orbit of billions and billions of tons of rock from changing its orbit even SLIGHTLY, which would forever change its climate a huge amount.
So, if a huge chunk of that rock was vaporized, then the orbit, the gravity, the atmosphere ( these are the things that decide if we live or die) would change terribly. Not to mention the earthquakes and volcanos that would happen
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Dark Spartan
5:58 pm | May 6, 2004
That was really good. One thing though, you never said or indicated that Larel was a Hunter until near the end. It was kinda confusing. Great story though. More work with this quality is expected.
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The author
2:22 am | May 5, 2004
Sometimes i have a person speak, i leave it to the readr to deifine who it is. Put the character together in your own mind, otherwise i try to indecate main characters talking
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Gold Elite
8:45 pm | May 4, 2004
Nice story. I like it. You just need to work on grammar. Also when someone speaks you need to put who's talking. You need to indent. Other than that, the story is near perfect.
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The Author
1:19 pm | May 4, 2004
and the covenant are really advanced and are likely able to keep their planet in one spot, this hasen't been proven so feel free to cotradict me
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yeti
6:39 am | May 4, 2004
so its orbit would decay and all woud perish.
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yeti
6:36 am | May 4, 2004
okay this is a fact___
the nuke that aaron had, you said that it would blow a sizable chunk of planet up.
the planet would then spin out of control and be flung into space or something, because the gravity or somethng would go crazy .
everything on the planet would DIE DIE DIE of lack of heat and light.
so it wouldnt matter WHERE the bomb went off, the planet would sill be DOOMED DOOMED DOOMED.
and that theory has been proven by scentists so dont contradict me.
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D4rj0n7
8:00 pm | May 3, 2004
Great Story keep it up!
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Helljumper
3:57 pm | May 3, 2004
great story i would just end it right here. but u could continue if u want.
ODST
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Ain Soph Aur
11:00 am | May 3, 2004
Very good story! keep it up.
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Spacefan
3:03 am | May 3, 2004
I hope that wasn't the end! I like THIS elite...
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I like Elites....
8:02 pm | May 2, 2004
this story is really good... kepp going.
(elites are so cool.)
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No one
2:54 pm | May 2, 2004
Yeah write more it's a really good story.MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
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guns_n_cars
2:27 pm | May 2, 2004
great story, cant wait for the next part, keep going!
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