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Comments for 'Death By Corrosion V1, E2: Tell Me More'



Walker
11:08 am | October 5, 2003
It's okay, Kurt, I'd probably react the same way.
Kurt Cobain
1:05 am | October 5, 2003
It's just that when your accused of something, that you didnt do you tend to get angry, but I already was and that just added to my anger! YEs you probably would have if you had the day I did that day.
Kurt Cobain
2:51 pm | October 4, 2003
Your right, I was just in a bad mood, for other reasons then this, and took it out on you guys, which was dumb and childish. I apoligize!
Walker
2:33 pm | October 4, 2003
Hey, Kurt, I was just offering a suggestion. We try to keep it clean over here, so I think it would do us all a favor to stop the senselessly crude comments that are often offensive to women, and there are some girls on this sie--me not being one of them, as you implied so bluntly. An @$$ or b!tch every once in awhile is acceptable, but over and over and over again is annoying. Chill out, dude. And I really think you should advertise.
Kurt Cobain
1:19 am | October 4, 2003
You know what, MasterGrunt! Go shove your dick up your mothas asshole, okay you dick sucking whore!
MasterGrunt
12:43 am | October 4, 2003
Ah, kurt I don't really know how to say this but you are the most immature two year old I've ever met. It's just a story don't get so worked up. Anyway, how can you say you hate jacks family if don't even know them. Words of wisdom: GROW UP YOU BIG BABY.
Kurt Cobain
9:20 pm | October 3, 2003
And learn how to fucking spell you cunt!
Kurt Cobain
9:16 pm | October 3, 2003
You know what JACK,
I really haven't seen the movie, you assface. I don't even remember the goddamn title. So you can go fuck your mom, your dad, you brothers, and you sisters. I don't care if you don't have any, go suck on your big ass tits that came out of you dick ass mouth. I don't give a goddamn fuck what you think, by the way, thats not what was going to happen you assface. I've already submitted the third, and it doesn't even get near that fuckin ending. So go suck your dad's fat dick, fuckin barbra streisand tit pussy fucking cunt licker! I fucking hate your family! Go suck Walkers pussy!
Jack
8:29 pm | October 3, 2003
Hey! I think I know what's going to happen next! Keyes is really Beck! And you wanna know how I fugured that out! Becuase you fucking stoll that story from that goddamn movie you crank sucking ass fuck! You think were stupid or something? You think we wouldn't notice that? You know what I think, I think that gay guy in your story is a character based on you. You can also do us all a favor and stop acting like a dumbass and saying that you don't know what movie I'm talking about. So why don't you go outside and play hide and go fuck yourself.
Kurt Cobain
5:09 pm | October 3, 2003
You know what Walker, shut your fat-ass mouth. It's my story, so fuck you!
Walker
2:47 am | October 3, 2003
Stop b!tching Kurt... stuff get's read or it doesn't. If you wanna change something about it, go advertise on other reviews.
Kurt Cobain
5:49 pm | October 2, 2003
god, does anyone read these?
Mainevent
11:40 am | October 2, 2003
I give you one point for spelling stuff right.

I give you one point for indenting.

I give you one point for using bold.

I give you one point for spelling the title ok.

I give you three points for substance.

I give you two points for finding a way to put someone related to keyes in there.

And I give you one point for comedic value.

But the fact that I wasn't in there, I have to take 9 points away. So you get a 1.

:P
Kurt Cobain
9:57 pm | October 1, 2003
Well rate it!
Mainevent
9:09 pm | October 1, 2003
I think it's like a box of chocolates. You'll never know what your gonna get.
The Author of this Story
7:24 pm | October 1, 2003
Tell me wat you think!


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