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Comments for 'The Sidewinder Tales' |
A.P.N JJiggssaw
12:53 pm | March 10, 2004
Geez Sage, lay off a little. His story wasn't THAT bad! You need to make some positive comments, at least once a year. There is A LOT of worse fan fiction floating around here in the winter; at least his multiplayer stories didn't have charachters who constantly screw up their sentences. KEEP WRITING.
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Mastergrunt
1:12 am | March 10, 2004
Is anybody gonna answer my question from my previous post.
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Sage Scorpion
11:35 pm | March 9, 2004
Aw, dude... this is just...bad. Very bad. C'mon now, the reds and goddamn blues? I can tell that you don't know anything about Halo, you just watched a few Red vs. Blue episodes, and tried to write a story around it.
Augh, this was mindnumbingly bad. First, play and beat the game on Legendary. Then, read "The Fall of Reach" by Eric Nylund. Then learn how to write. A good way to do this would be to pass 5th grade English. I'm serious.
Also, reading some of the local fan fiction would help tremendously. Read anything by CoLd BlooDed, Agent Shade, Sterfrye36, or myself (I don't mean to toot my own horn, but at least my story was grammatically correct, and you guys seemed to like it ;p). Please.
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A.P. JJiggssaw
10:18 pm | March 9, 2004
Oops sorry my previous comment was for a different story-it was pretty good. You didn't set up a whole lot of storyline, though, it would be nice to see why and what is happening. Nice work.
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Mastergrunt
2:26 am | March 9, 2004
I like. Is this story supposed to tie in with the Halo story or is it just a mutliplayer scenario.
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JJiggssaw
1:14 pm | March 8, 2004
ok but not great
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