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Comments for 'Black Knight Pelican Attack: The Tower Chapter 2' |
Tango709
5:58 pm | July 28, 2003
u didn't get a chance to check it? what kinda excuse is that for mistakes every third word? i cannot read this story unless the grammar is fixed... did u ever go to the second grade? if u did, u missed many lessons...
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Steele
10:30 pm | June 29, 2003
A textbook example of how not to use grammar.
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Shadowrunner
9:52 am | June 29, 2003
Just a tip here: Spellcheck = freind
Learn a little grammar please?
Good story and like the details.
7/10 -the grammar really destroys this good story...
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JK Hazard
8:31 am | June 28, 2003
Thanks for the tips.
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AlphaBravo343
9:32 pm | June 27, 2003
Actually it is spelled GRAMMAR. However, about the story. I'm sure it would be awesome, but you're trying to put in too many things without paying attention to detail. That and the grammar. If you work on those two things, you'll do fine.
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Hunter_Killer
9:21 pm | June 27, 2003
Yah, GRAMMER! Other than that, good!
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JK Hazard
8:42 pm | June 27, 2003
Sorry about the grammar mistakes I did'nt get a chance to check it.
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