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Comments for 'Black Knight Pelican Attack: Hot LZ Chapter 1' |
bigkitty
8:36 pm | June 28, 2003
The story plot was okay, but it lacked detail and had TONS of grammer errors.
6/10
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bigkitty
8:36 pm | June 28, 2003
what the hell is a chif?
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Uwnanted
4:59 pm | June 27, 2003
jokes that was awseome 9.10
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the unwanted news
4:53 pm | June 27, 2003
crap crap crap jk hazard needs more people going crazy and dead the chif was good 4/10
P.S crap crap crap crap
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JK
5:22 am | June 27, 2003
where it says"ver"i mean over.
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JK
5:22 am | June 27, 2003
At least that is ver with
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Hunter_Killer
9:20 pm | June 26, 2003
I meant the Fake Ronald, sorry Real Ronald.
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Hunter_Killer
9:12 pm | June 26, 2003
*Takes Med-Kit, And heals JK Hazard. Takes Assault Rifle, and gives RONALD twenty shots of lead to think about*
"Hahahaha, I only protect the inocent. And I'm kind, you ****!"
*Squezes off another five rounds*
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Wiley K
8:36 pm | June 26, 2003
Cool, thanks for clearing that up.
Sorry I blamed all that stuff on you Ronald.
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agent orange
7:12 pm | June 26, 2003
ok let me say someting I (being the real agent orange and not that retard who wrote that stupid stuff,)i did not write that- uh stupid stuff. my friend wrote that because i kind-of well...
did some not-so-nice (but halarious) things to him at a party. the point is that i take full responsibility and apologies greatly for the inconvienence this has stirred up and have cleared up the matter up. and he also impersonated wiley kimball. i completely respect you wiley and there will be no such thing again. he also might of said other things that im not aware of. so please dont take it out on me in the future because i didnt do it.
p.s. people, keep eyes out for these things and alert the webmaster so as to stop this in the future
p.p.s. this is also at a marine named peters.
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ronald
6:45 pm | June 26, 2003
what the heck i didnt do it whoever di it was gay and sure as hell wasnt me i dont do sick and stupid stuff like that. i thouht it was pretty good
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JK Hazard
1:57 pm | June 26, 2003
Hahaha
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Wiley K.
1:39 pm | June 26, 2003
Got a car I can use? I need to get to Mexico, fast
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Wiley
1:37 pm | June 26, 2003
Thank you.
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JK Hazard
12:39 pm | June 26, 2003
Damn right
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The Real Wiley
11:51 am | June 26, 2003
*Pulls out silenced pistol and shoots Ronald behind Hunter_Killer's back*
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Hunter_Killer
10:48 pm | June 25, 2003
*Steps between Wiley K., JK Hazard, and Ronald, MA5B Assault Rifle at the ready* Break it up!
----SEVERAL MUINITES LATER----
Dude, there were several grammer and spelling mistakes. The plot was good tho, but a few wording mistakes. But, if you try you can be a great Halo Fan fiction Writer. *Lowers MA5B*
8/10
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JK Hazard
4:05 pm | June 25, 2003
Thanks for that i admit it might be not all that it just popped in my head when i came home from school
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The REAL Wiley K.
3:59 pm | June 25, 2003
Oh, and WTF is your problem? I said I was sorry.
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JK Hazard
3:54 pm | June 25, 2003
No need to get offensive the whole point of comments to say if it is good or bad.
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The REAL Wiley Kimball
3:54 pm | June 25, 2003
Stop that RONALD. Don't ruin MY reputation. If you want to diss his fanfic, don't hide behind someone who thinks the fanfic is awsome. Oh, and learn grammer. Any of the vips could tell the difference between my educated and your crap posts. Sorry about that, I called him a n00b and now he hates me. This is just low.
THE REAL Wiley thought this fanfic was awsome, I give it 9.5/10
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JK Hazard
3:34 pm | June 25, 2003
Damn i did say this is my first dumbass i no god dam halo fanatic i thought i give try do anyway dumbass.
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wiley kimball
3:25 pm | June 25, 2003
your stupid go to hell
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wiley kimball
3:25 pm | June 25, 2003
your stupid go to hell
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wiley kimball
3:25 pm | June 25, 2003
i have to say, all the fan fiction ive read, ive never read anything so HORRIbLe in my life. i didnt follow its own plot, it was totally gay. you are the stupidest retart i have ever seen and i hope that your mom cuts your balls off and shoves them up your ass. i mean, if it was just bad i wouldnt say anything but that shit you wrote was totally lame. it was horrible please do not discrace this website with anymore of your stupid gay-ass mother fucking cocksucker ass licking work.
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