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Comments for 'The Hell Of War Through The Eyes Of A Marine :Part 5' |
THE DARK ELITE
12:39 am | June 14, 2002
THE STORY WAS GREAT BUT U SUCK...
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Jon-Bob
3:34 pm | April 16, 2002
awesome story
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ssj9000chilango
1:55 am | April 16, 2002
I love the story. When is the next one coming out?
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Jaywhit10
4:21 pm | April 13, 2002
sorry i just read it i posted something on but i had no problems
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Ryan
4:19 pm | April 13, 2002
I'd like some advice on my story that I posted a few days ago.. but NO... no one replies to Ryan..
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Jaywhit10
2:11 pm | April 13, 2002
Ya sure i might and wait a minute???? damn i started talking abiut grammer. ok i aprreicate that but really i would to know some suggestions on the story or how'd u like it. Thank you for giving me some advice Vector i really appericate it.
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Jaywhit10
11:36 am | April 13, 2002
Plz people I would like some comments but don't talk about my grammer all i would like to know is how do you like the story. I have been told many times about my grammer. Ok and thank you for reading my things it actully makes me feel good to know that.
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vector40
7:12 am | April 13, 2002
You're in school, right? Ask your English teacher for some tips.
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Jaywhit10
5:24 am | April 13, 2002
K thanks but the only time i know im not using good grammer is when people tell me. I have no idea but thanks.
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Ryan
2:26 am | April 13, 2002
Chill, I'm not gonna bug you about your grammar... Mine being perfect, after all. Nice story though, you have potential. The trick to learning proper grammar is trying to type with it. For example: The next time your in a IM conversation with someone, make the extra effort to use proper grammar. Eventually it becomes second nature, and you'll be using it all of the time, like me. Good luck, and hey, keep the good stories coming! :)
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