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Comments for 'Angels war III stage'



Alpha Lance
5:56 pm | October 19, 2003
That good man, but remember to indent between endmarks of a sentence.
Javier Fernandez-Vina
12:18 pm | October 19, 2003
Im turning that all around, ill be using spell check now and the'll be no more spelling mistakes.
thanks for your comments keep'em up.:)
Sarge
12:14 pm | October 19, 2003
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Sarge
12:12 pm | October 19, 2003
I saw ome definate noted imporvement from the first one. I did actually enjoy reading this one...
However, your whole grammar/spelling thing is pretty bad I think if you just looked at it before submiting you'd see that stuff.


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