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Comments for 'The Second Ring (Part 1)' |
Cyclone
12:54 pm | November 29, 2003
Very cool intro. I keep reading all these really good fanfics, and it makes me want to write my own, but I'm afraid I won't do the characters justice, y'know?
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Jason
10:34 pm | November 28, 2003
Thanks guys... don't forget to check out my other story, Calistra, if you'd like more.
Second part coming no later than Dec. 5th (college finals, yada yada).
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Jillybean
4:41 pm | November 28, 2003
Youch - now that's an opening! I like, oh yes I like very much.
Looking forward to reading some more.
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FOrunnER
2:15 pm | November 28, 2003
Sorry, Im confused. There are three rings all clumped together, spinning on difereent axises, with a planet in there center? Now, is each one habitable, or only one?
Regardless, great story for a N00B. 9.7/10. But just a warning, you may not get more than two or three responses during your first couple stories, because most people are way or newbies, N00B's, so dont get discouraged. Anyway, great story.
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2:15 pm | November 28, 2003
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reek@midsouth.rr.com
5:15 am | November 28, 2003
I go by: thaserver
I like the start for sure. A little puzzled about Cortana. Seems like she could just be downloaded into new digs. I read the prequel novel "The Fall of Reach". I seem to recall something about them having a "lifespan" programmed in or something. So this ring is more complex huh? Multiple rings spinning on an axis each, with a "planet" centered in them? Kind of like the astronaut training thingamagigs I guess. Have you read or seen Contact? I'll come back and read more.
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