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Comments for 'Ishkabibbl's Story Part 3'



sunscorpian
12:11 pm | March 27, 2003
ok cool
Ishkabibbl
3:22 am | March 27, 2003
I felt like being different so E.Z is evac zone which may be different from the L.Z. Hope that clears it up.
sunscorpian
2:53 am | March 27, 2003
the story is really starting to pull together! the only thing i can say though is that things seem to happen to fast. you should really relaxe and spread the story out.
otherwise great job


p.s. what does E.Z. stand for? do you mean L.Z Loading Zone?
Ishkabibbl
2:41 am | March 27, 2003
I promise there should be more action later.
Steele
2:39 am | March 27, 2003
Not the most military of stories, but pretty good. Keep them coming.


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