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Comments for 'The Adventures of Lt. Jake, Part Four' |
Koneko-chan
4:14 am | February 27, 2004
Hahahaha! I LIKE EXPLOSIONS *cheesy grin* Dun' worry...Neko isn't here, she's asleep...cause it's too early for her to be up...I wish I could be nocturnal *sigh* Oh...what was I saying? Ummm..."TO BE CONTINUED?" Been awhile...You DO know who I am, right? Cause if you dun'...THINK REEEEAL HARD!
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Scrawl
6:56 pm | February 22, 2004
Geez, you sure got a lot of cliff-hangers up your sleeve! Liking it, liking it...
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pooman
4:19 pm | September 6, 2003
lol
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Hunter_Killer
3:25 pm | September 6, 2003
lol. =D
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Alpha Lance
11:58 am | September 6, 2003
LOL, damn your right, ese. And no spanish wasn't my first. But I will take spanish one day.
Alpha Lance
Creator of Halo Trilogy
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hornet34
11:54 am | September 6, 2003
Alpha Lance, do you mean "keep it up ese" Guess Spanish wasn't your first language, LOL, J/K.
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hornet34
11:53 am | September 6, 2003
Hey, I still think this story is great, despite any grammar and spelling errors. 9.3/10
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Alpha Lance
11:36 am | September 6, 2003
Pretty much agree with everyone, but it was great, and keep it up essay.(9.8/10)
Alpha Lance
Creator of Halo Trilogy
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Covie Killer
11:36 am | September 6, 2003
That was good, 9.5/10.
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Alpha Lance
12:00 am | September 6, 2003
Wooooooooo!!!!!!!!! I just notice that me and Covie Killer posted at the same time!!!!
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James Kinsella
8:31 pm | September 5, 2003
At least a 9.6/10
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Hunter_Killer
8:02 pm | September 5, 2003
Lol, sorry.
Oh, by tyhe way James: WHAT WAS ME SCORE?
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James Kinsella
11:02 am | September 5, 2003
In case you didn't know it is a new paragraph for every new speaker. However, I can understand that that would be hard on a story this full of speech, so I won't go into it further. Other than that, interesting story. Also, stop spamming other peoples comment sections with advertisements for this and the series of weird events. Thanks.
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Walker
9:45 pm | September 4, 2003
your other stories are good, but the quality of this series seems to be slowly degrading at some points... despite that, it was good. 9.8/10
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