halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'Covenant Invasion Part 1 (Changed)'



Hunter_Killer
2:22 pm | July 10, 2003
Ok, my first piece was shit, this is better than that.

Not Ready to give a number yet.
Hikaru-119
10:53 am | July 9, 2003
Pretty good, but could use a little more detail in parts.
Elfster
5:02 am | July 6, 2003
See? =)
Elfster
4:42 am | July 6, 2003
Ok, whenever I refresh a comments page, anything I posted previous to it is posted again. One time I accidently posted 5 times without noticing it, Sry bout that.
Elfster
4:42 am | July 6, 2003
Ok, whenever I refresh a comments page, anything I posted previous to it is posted again. One time I accidently posted 5 times without noticing it, Sry bout that.
Elfster
4:42 am | July 6, 2003
Ok, whenever I refresh a comments page, anything I posted previous to it is posted again. One time I accidently posted 5 times without noticing it, Sry bout that.
LordofDestruction
7:48 pm | July 5, 2003
I've decided to post my grading scale, okay.
0/10-Total peice of shit, read at your own risk
1/10-Not much better
2/10-Shit
3/10-Lacks any construction, virtually unreadable
4/10-Needs much improvement
5/10-Average work for people in this age group
6/10-We're getting somewhere now, needs more depth and conciseness
7/10-Readable, Though lacks polish
8/10-Good writing, needs a little more polish
9/10-Excellent, requires good grammar, depth, polish and readablity.
10/10-Perfect, Publishing quality material, I doubt i'll ever give one of these.
LordofDestruction
6:50 pm | July 5, 2003
Whats with all of the double posts? 8.5/10
Steele
4:46 pm | July 5, 2003
Not too shabby, 9/10.
Elfster
11:45 am | July 5, 2003
LOL, woot, finally something Hawk cant complain about. Btw im aware of a few little minor errors like "explosion z! oomed". I was aware of them when I posted it.... Ok I wasnt aware of it at the time, I thought I had fixed it but considering this story was taken from my inbox from one of those Re: emails what can I say lol.
Elfster
11:45 am | July 5, 2003
LOL, woot, finally something Hawk cant complain about. Btw im aware of a few little minor errors like "explosion z! oomed". I was aware of them when I posted it.... Ok I wasnt aware of it at the time, I thought I had fixed it but considering this story was taken from my inbox from one of those Re: emails what can I say lol.
Hawk7886
8:20 pm | July 4, 2003
Much better! some minor errors here and there, but nothing bad enough for mention.
Elfster
4:42 pm | July 4, 2003
heh well I asked you... (Btw the sucks to be you thing I was just kidding about)
Elfster
4:42 pm | July 4, 2003
heh well I asked you... (Btw the sucks to be you thing I was just kidding about)
Hunter_Killer
4:12 pm | July 4, 2003
I don't know what to say


bungie.org
brr!